A Prayer..

A Prayer..

A Poem by Arabdha

Bowed is my head..
folded my arms..
my world has no sorrow..
it inflicts no pain either..
mine is a sacrosanctum of happiness and melody..
but its lost somewhere in the sea of human misery..
and therefore my soul embraces this simple prayer..
that of humanity..

© 2011 Arabdha


Author's Note

Arabdha
thank you Abhijit..the suggestion for the use of 'melody' was his..the original word was 'glee'..

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The poem is very nice and the concept is well expressed , the only thing I can point out (though I may be wrong) is that I am not sure whether glee is the appropriate term here . If you are not using that exact word here for any particular reason , you might consider replacing it with some synonym .
Once again , a very nice read .

Posted 13 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.




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Prayers are such a private matter, like a confidential talk between the very best of friends, you lost me a little using the word sacrosanctum (consilium)
However I did enjoy this poem :0)

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Raw, yet packs a punch with honesty. Amen

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

amazing.. though one becomes lost, faith in prayer is what keeps them going.


Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

much light in the center stanza , a wonderful poetic embrace of hope in humanity

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MashaAllah, this is great!

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is Beautiful!!!!

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

A metaphor melody to be more then a conversation but just a prayer

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

What a rich depth of life and experience... a breathing out of a prayer that utters words of hope even in the midst of misery... Courage...

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

oh wow. I love this piece. its simple yet it says so much. keep writing

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

what a relatable write. The feeling of lending a hand and nobody taking it. speaking the honest inspirations and nobody listening. The need to share your peace. wonderful.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on January 31, 2011
Last Updated on February 5, 2011
Tags: prayer, peace, happiness, humbleness, life, world, humanity

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Arabdha
Arabdha

Bangalore, Karnataka, India



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