A Frozen Moment

there are times when you feel bliss,beauty and serenity all wrapped into one single moment..nothing extravagant..just an ordinary everyday moment..you close your eyes and experience perfection..

Time stops and the moment stands frozen..

a gentle calm enthralling a tumultuous present..

everything fuses..

as if all were one..

one vivid phenomenon encompassing all of life's myriad hues..

The moment,the serenity seems surreal..

for how can life's agile motion be brought to a standstill !

Yet time's clock has seemingly forgotten to tick..

And this moment seems to linger..

Its mesmerizing and austere..

A beautiful sojourn..

A revelation in life's reverberation..

I close my eyes and its so easy

to get lost in the surreal aura..

To forget the past and the present..

just to be lost in the moment..

But alas! I'm jolted back and the clock is ticking again..

The moment is gone..

So much for ethereal beauty..

joyful,happy and yet so transient..

..a beautiful episode in time's timeless domain.. 

Author's Note

suggestions are most welcome.. :)

Reviews

[emmajoy]

'To forget the past and the present.. just to be lost in the moment.. ' An affirmation of loving one's lif, confirmomg life is slower than humanity, that we do have time to just live a moment in absolute stillness, to feel, to see, to live .. to be ..

Beautifully penned ..

[LadyNaida]

Wow, this is so beautiful. Is like going into a time travel journey. I believe that time is for those that want to live, love and laugh. See, time is what we make of it, but not what society would want it to be. Enjoyed my read.

[Keoni]

how do you know? this is not for all, you are testing me......and its so like you to do this........k

[Searching 4 Serenity]

There's quite a few things this makes me think of. Most of all two lovers lost in a blissful kiss.

[Cassey]

Good job another great piece you have writen that i have read

[imawriter]

I feel this way when I am sitting in my backyard watching birds

[abhas]

and i read and close my eyes to ponder over all these moments i had... which makes this moment another one of those... a very interesting and soothing concept...
a moment... in all its imperfection seems the perfect little thing sometimes.... bravo... :)

[Nothing Personal]

Like a kiss, the first touch, the first look of acceptance in her eyes, the first poem written, the first book published, getting drenched in the first rain of autumn the first time, the first love trapped in the first heartbreak..Well done

[luciddreamer]

Perfect moments...we have so few and forget so many...wonderful write :)

Peace
Robin