SOS..to the horizon !

SOS..to the horizon !

A Poem by Arabdha

Silence resonates and reverberates..
an unfillable echo in a distant void...

the air carries with it projections of a million dreams..
voices unheard,inceptions unrealized..

A call to the universe,
an SOS to the horizon..

the song of life,
music mundane,lyrics ethereal..

the voiceless pathos of a dismantled soul..
journey unknown,
destination a fading haze..

two wearied feet and a dejected heart..
and yet the flame of endless quest burning bright..

passion emblazoned..
trapped in delirium and awe..
lost in singularity and anonymity..

a persisting devotion to an endless path..
a brave endeavor on its part !

© 2011 Arabdha


Author's Note

Arabdha
Thank you..Lady Nadia for the title suggestion :)

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This is vivid and full of energy. This, for me, is a poem about strength, about facing adversity, and throwing our fears and despair into the winds and carrying on... it tells us how, lost in "singularity and anonymity", unheard and unseen by others, raked by the winds and the vagaries of nature, we may truly find our inner strength... where there is nothing else for it come from but from within, that "flame of endless quest burning bright". Evocative and inspiring poem, really well written, thank you! :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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How your words ride the waves of thought! There is such an enchanted phrasing that breathes insight into the hungering heart and mind... Loved it all, but those last lines seemed so fiercely courageous to me... fighting on through it all.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I was expecting something much more violent from the title and was pleasently surprised. nice work.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

:"the song of life,
music mundane,lyrics ethereal.."...and yet "a persisting devotion to an endless path..
a brave endeavor on its part !"...this is what life is all about!inspiring read!

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Damn the torpedoes...Full speed ahead!


Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Seems that whatever one feels, however one feels, there has to be hope and the strength that things will get better. Your words are compelling and powerful, sad in some way yet the ending most definitely opens a door ..

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This was great! Loved it!

~Erinne

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I love this! Nicely done! Yes, a perfect title.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

The air carries with it projections of a million dreams..
voices unheard,inceptions unrealized.. A beautiful piece!

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is vivid and full of energy. This, for me, is a poem about strength, about facing adversity, and throwing our fears and despair into the winds and carrying on... it tells us how, lost in "singularity and anonymity", unheard and unseen by others, raked by the winds and the vagaries of nature, we may truly find our inner strength... where there is nothing else for it come from but from within, that "flame of endless quest burning bright". Evocative and inspiring poem, really well written, thank you! :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Such a twisting paradoxical and brilliant quip this is!

"the song of life,
music mundane,lyrics ethereal.."

Loved that part.

~M.Babu~

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on August 31, 2011
Last Updated on September 17, 2011
Tags: life, silence, journey, persistence, pain

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Arabdha
Arabdha

Bangalore, Karnataka, India



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