It's our life

"It's your life, so own it"

It's our life, we stepped into this world to achieve...
It a rife, some shots of acts turns to naive...

It's our life, just identical to the game of chess...
It turns out to strife, if you fluffed at acumen that makes it mess...

It's our life, we consistently struggle to succeed...
It becomes a knife, employ it to stab the grieve until it bleed...

It's our life, we habitually live in illusions...
It becomes a wife, if you breathe in reality and discard the delusions...

It's our life, though it is very short we spend it squandered...
It becomes highlife, if you render new dimensions to shape it overpowered....


IT'S YOUR LIFE, MAKE A BANGGGGG.......

Author's Note

They are my words, So do I scribbled whatever I feel, criticism or appraisal both helps me.

Reviews

[Najam Us Saher]

Deep thoughts and perspective on life was nicely expressed. I liked your choice of words.

[Surya]

Of course appreciation, It's our life and everything Is fair within.....
Good perception towards life...
Thank you Aravind for sharing...

[APOORVA]

good message and great conviction
liked it