LIFE....

my conversation with my life......

A conversation with life...........

 

I am not angry with you "My Life" …

I am just upset over the dark truth you show me…

I am just tensed because lie and hatred has engulfed this beautiful world in itself….

I am not angry with you “My life”

I am just upset over the innocent questions that you ask me…

I am tensed because I don’t know the answers..

I never thought I have to pay such a huge price ‘to live’….

 

I am not angry with you “My life”

I am just upset over the way this world has changed….

I am just tensed because I can’t change myself !!!!!

 

Reviews

[Blackcat]

good one!!!!

[Mystic]

nice poem!!! especially the last line... very true!! this world is changing and if you can't change then its the matter of concern....

[sweet angel]

you are right sometimes life shows you so many hardships that you become upset with it... even i too feel like this.....

[Dead_End]

its a very good concept... I never thought it could make such a wonderful poem!!!

[*~Kristy~*]

I sometimes say the exact same things :(

[Sketch]

Its good, definitely an interesting read. I like the whole idea of having a conversation with your life. Just one thing: "I never thought I have to bear pain so much silently in my heart�" This seems a bit off. You maybe want to change it around or add "I never thought I'd have to bear pain ect..." Or you can leave it. Just a suggestion. The ending is sweet.

[Elrebmik™]

Epic poem...I totally agree with Hawker...love the ending!!

[LeeLee Ryder]

superb.....a great Soul searching journey... thumbs up
Loved it... all the way thru...
I hope all of us start having a heart to heart with our lives ..
Chat away...Thanks again...
LeeLee

[celyn]

Nice poem..

"I am just upset over the way this world has changed�.
I am just tensed because I can't change myself"

- Great ending :)