Within Corners of Struct

Within Corners of Struct

A Poem by Archishman Rick

O born of the wide wilderness,
Simple, aware and earnest man,
With a granite heart of tenderness,
In honour's light sure of what you can,
Keep up errantry in knightly stand,
On this assuring home-rooted land,
Worry not about bestowing hands,
On paths leading to bourgeois grands.

Shaken esteem and broken belief in your stance,
Mended in remembrance of untainted trust,
In nurturing earth where blossomed your first advance,
Facing a harsh world to trek with poised conduct.

The ones on the gutter and those on the throne,
Bland stain of smut and bright sparkle of status,
Roles seen through wielding common eyes of your own,
That seat candid mirrors in divine chorus.
Chaos in calm within four corners of struct,
You contain with virtue in profound spirit,
A transcendent worth beyond social construct,
Lives in your conscience and by truth's lamp is lit.

© 2024 Archishman Rick


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masterfully writ .. I am delighted to have passed this way & sincerely hope that others shall now find their way here in the wake I hope I have created .. you get a double 👍👍's up from me anyway .. Neville

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Archishman Rick

1 Week Ago

Wow, reading that feels incredible, sir. I shall take inspiration from your splendid review for tend.. read more
Neville

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you are most welcome Rik .. Neville
I think it is the way the rhythmn constructs the granite truth in this complex poem that strikes me most.

Posted 2 Weeks Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Archishman Rick

2 Weeks Ago

I greatly appreciate your honest review, thank you very much for the visit and read.
Best wi.. read more
~With a granite heart of tenderness,~ A great line. A great poem of inequity and the structure as is.

Posted 3 Weeks Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Archishman Rick

3 Weeks Ago

I am honoured to read your encouraging review, Soren. Thanks a ton and I wish you the best.

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Added on September 4, 2024
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Archishman Rick
Archishman Rick

West Bengal, India



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A fellow in my mid twenty's, I have a knack to challenge myself mentally and physically. Whether it strengthens or softens my general naivety, I do not know. I hope to find, and trust the worth in t.. more..

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