Reflections

A bluebird sang to me this morning
It told me of a whisper it heard on the wind,
As it soared gracefully above the world

This whisper, it said, was that of a seraph,
Proclaiming a soliloquy of the heart;
A eulogy of love and laughter

As this graceful creature warbled magnificently,
A soft breeze delicately kissed my cheek,
And in that wondrous instant, I perceived your immaculate splendor

My valiant azure friend then took to that same wind,
And soared with you, in harmonious glory,
So very high above the clouds, and eternally free

May you forever attain tranquil jubilation, most treasured angel...

Reviews

[Vidya Bacchus]

Talking to birds now are we?You should really see someone about that hahaha.Just kidding.I think i said this before on your other reviews, you write beautifully and from the heart.Your every line is perfect for the other.It flows very well.It was a most lovely read:)

[Arcus]

-shakes fist angrily- I can talk to birds all I want! XD

Thank you for your kind words. I deeply and truly appreciate your support. I just write what comes to me. :)

[Vidya Bacchus]

As do I .You are welcome Arcus, and don't you shake your fist at me mister hahahah!!!!

[Arcus]

-shakes fist with intensity- I'll do as I please! XD

[Vidya Bacchus]

Hahahaha very well if you insist lol

[Shadow Paradox]

I sense death in here the part where it says "My valiant azure friend then took to that same wind,
And soared with you, in harmonious glory, " Nature mixed with "supernatural state of a loved being who once lived is what I get from this and a gothic feeling again :) these are just my thoughts. I enjoy your writing.

[Sami Khalil]

You have soared in this wonderful poem...Bravo.............

[Arcus]

Thank you, so very much, dear friend. :)

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome...:)...................

[Arcus]

Highly emphatic, and connected writing. I love the darkness, of the seraph through your words, and the positivism, in your ending, you sketch great visions, and imagery. Thank you Arcus, amazing stuff.

- Elisa

[Arcus]

Thank you for your wonderful, and kind words. I deeply appreciate your comments. I am very happy that you enjoyed this. :)

You're very welcome my friend. I will check out more of you later this evening. :)

[Arcus]

I look forward to it. :)

Me too :) me too :)