War within

War within

A Poem by Arienas

Just something I was thinking about. I know it doesn't make much sense. It was about a note a friend sent to me.







I feel the war within,

raging up my throat,


my tounge verse my mouth

my brain verse the note,



The noise in my ears

and the pain in my throat,


Kills me to see,

the war within me.


But I know for the rest of my life,

I will be alone,


Fighting this war

fighting this note.



© 2008 Arienas

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The most difficult battle is the one with yourself or the one that rages within.The torment is evident in your poem.Lovely pictures alonside.I am reposting my appreciation for your poem.

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