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Whisper

Whisper

A Poem by Aria

 

 

Why do you fall to your knees

Crashing into all that you've run from

All that you've died for

Why do you fall

 

Stay still now and I might reach you

Don't say a word, not one whisper

Feel the earth beneath you move

Shaking for what we've done

 

Why do you fall to your knees

Down to where they want you

Where they can reach you

Why do you fall

 

Stay still now and I might reach you

Don't say my name, not one whisper

Make the earth beneath them move

Shaking for what they've done

 

Break their bodies as they broke ours

Make them cry for all you've run from

Break their hearts as they broke ours

Make them scream for all you've died for

 

Walk to me as they fall to their knees

Crashing into all that we've run from

All that we've died for

Walk to me as they fall

 

 

 

 

 

 

Copyright ©2008 Anorin Arssinous

© 2008 Aria


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A thought provoking and casted piece, well done, good read.





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A thought provoking and casted piece, well done, good read.





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Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

thanks everyone

Posted 8 Years Ago


Wow very interesting, it's thought provoking and is extremely powerful. Beautifully written.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

your words are strong and powerful . . . a wonderful piece to read

Posted 9 Years Ago


That was a really cool poem Anorin! I enjoyed reading it and it kind of reminded me of a dream a person would have thinking they were dead.
Anyway great write! Thanks for sharing.

Kelley

Posted 10 Years Ago


a sort of reminder of war and the cruel and provacative ways that lovers are torn apart
if one falls, both are jeperdized


Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is gorgeous. I know, I say that about a lot of your writing, but this moved me incredibly. Parts of it are so incredibly heartfelt, even for me. I love it. It also reminded me a little of Providence and Devi wanting Vincent to always be there, kind of, but maybe I'm off with that. Either way, I love it.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Wow, this is amazing. I agree, this would be an awesome song. It's full of raw emotion and energy. Great write!!!!!

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I have one question...
Is this supposed to be song or a poem? I'm just wondering because the stanza's the same every other one.
If its not a song, you should make it a song. That would be really great because it's kind of repetitive to be a poem.

All and all, it's very good and I enjoyed reading it.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Wow. This is magnificent!
So powerful and ... perfect.
I really love this piece. For some reason I really connected with it.
This poem is such a beauty.
I'm adding it to my favorites for sure.
I'm so glad I stumbled across this.

-Elissa :)

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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