you are alive

you are alive

A Poem by ArielForever98
"

i had to convince myself

"
you are alive
you have to stay alive
you have to prove them wrong
you have to be okay
you cannot break down
you are strong
you must be strong now
it has to be
I'm so sorry
but it is so
god damn it
Alexandria
you're f*cking alive
be a little grateful
just last
the night
please

© 2015 ArielForever98


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ArielForever98
idk......

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For noting 'idk' this is well done. It really shows the struggles of someone who has to not only remind them self that they are alive but has to also try to fight to stay in that condition. I love the line 'you have to prove them wrong' because that is true for all of us who have to remind ourselves that we are alive. We have to prove all the people who have contributed to this feeling that they were wrong.

Keep Dreaming. ^^

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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very real...very feeling and revealing. Deep thoughts and great view of reality, you're very expressive which I enjoy!......Kyam

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

For noting 'idk' this is well done. It really shows the struggles of someone who has to not only remind them self that they are alive but has to also try to fight to stay in that condition. I love the line 'you have to prove them wrong' because that is true for all of us who have to remind ourselves that we are alive. We have to prove all the people who have contributed to this feeling that they were wrong.

Keep Dreaming. ^^

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on September 23, 2015
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