A Poem by Quill

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The abounding joy the orators of holiness postulated has been realized

Such a joy comes through unshaken belief and ceaseless devotion

The joy grants continuous elation and progressive reflection

It redeems, assures retribution and fortifies the spirit

It rids one of transgressions and gives empowering insights  

It empowers beyond emotions and primitive decadence

The ameliorates all forms of existence in every way

Dedication to its cause is exceedingly justified beyond any other

Though the plebeian features may rear its head intermittently 

One must not succumb to their unworthy allure 

For the instant gratification they promise are heavily burdened 

Hence I shall remain forever devout to the abounding joy

At first there is long suffering which comes with deliverance

It is tedious however good things are often attained through Herculean trials

Therefore I shall continually ponder on this course

And looking beyond I will attain the greatest heights

© 2022 Quill

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Your spirituality is quite evident in this write. You seem to be convincing yourself you are on the right course. Instant gratification is seldom worth it. Interesting write. Lydi**

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6 Months Ago

thank you Lydi
Extremely well done. I like the optimism in your piece. The devotion to joy is a great message.

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6 Months Ago

at times such optimism is the only option, thanks for your time

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Added on July 23, 2022
Last Updated on July 23, 2022
Tags: religion, prayer, devotion, grace, power, God, wisdom, soul, angel, spirit



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