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la basient

A Poem by Quill
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feeling right

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I once kissed this girl
She had a beautiful scent
Her smile was different from the rest
Accompanied with an alluring zest
Now i hope for the best
Funny it almost seems like a test
For things have begun to manifest
Yet I cannot be blind to any dent
As her countenance was pulchritudinous from the first
Could this continue at length?
I wouldn't want to be caught in a net
One which won't let me vent
Neither would I want my will to be bent
Nor my life to be for rent
I do hope instead she shelters me like a tent
But who knows what could happen next

© 2022 Quill


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Quill
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I'm not quite sure I get the meaning of this but I'm guessing you have religious beliefs. If that is the case I commend you for your decisions. The bible states - "Avert your eyes from a comely woman."

Nice poem.

Posted 1 Year Ago



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Added on August 7, 2022
Last Updated on August 28, 2022
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Quill
Quill

Abuja, Christian, Nigeria



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