FED UP!

             FED UP!

If this is what my life is ,

Seriously, then bye I donn wanna live it.

If this is  what my life is ,

Then thanks take it back.

If this is what my life is ,

Then please stay away from me.

Coz you ,you can't understand what it is.

You really can't,

I know the pain of it,

no- one else can feel it.

Please stay away,

Coz you donn know how I feel when they donn talk to me just for my mistakes.

Coz you can't feel that pain in yourself which I do feel when they stare at me like anything.

Coz you can't understand how do I feel when they say me to stay away from those people whom I love to be with.

Coz you can't understand how do I have to run from them to achieve my happiest moments in life .

You really can't feel it.

You really can't feel that loneliness in yourself which I do feel.

You can't feel the beats of my heart.

You can't feel what i feel "A BODY WITHOUT A SOUL."

If this is what my life is then please...

Author's Note

The truth is that no-one in this whole world can feel your pain ...what can they do is just sympathise you .You alone have to face obstacles in you life.

Reviews

[Haseo]

the only one who can feel your pain is a person who were in your position at one time, but that's very rare, I don't believe that giving up is the solution.
you have to fight back, even if its for one last time.

[Marianne Rose]

I hear the anger, and the indignation of anyone trying to say they feel the same way or they know how it is for you. That message is loud and clear- a push back against all the trite phrases or advice people might give you, or the way people try to sympathize by saying they've been there. The poem has an interesting voice- strong and streetwise. Yeah, I feel pushed back- put on notice. Palpable anger.

[DRAGO]

nice. Rather but intuitive

[Arooj Purra]

thanks a lot.

[Shabeeh Haider]

Some things in life really make you fed up. You are right, only the person who is going through it can experience the pain. Others are merely spectators and not really aware what the person is going through.

[Arooj Purra]

Yes dear you are absolutely right .people will just give you sympathies and nothing else.You have to face your problems alone.No-one will stand by you no -one.Thanks for your review.

[DRAGO]

you are also the only perseon who can feel your hapiness, on a more posotive note

[Arooj Purra]

yes friend you are right.

[wordman]

well my friend welcome to the real world,maybe it`s a test,maybe you must feel pain and sadness to feel the great times coming ! maybe bad times defines who you are,maybe it`s in your power to change all these problems,and some one else is in worse shape than you,that would swap places anytime

[Alexandra Hounschell]

Huh. I wasn't planning on feeling sad but hey, good writing makes you feel things. Nice piece

[Arooj Purra]

thank you dear.

[MICASA]

your thoughts are very true and deep. its the bitter truth that people just can't understand your pain but do show off that they do understand you. your pain is directly reflected in your poem... i like the way you express yourself through your poems...
have a good night!

[Arooj Purra]

yes you are absolutely right ...thanks friend.

[MICASA]

you are most welcome arooj purra

[iamshadowine]

this is so amazing! i loved the description of the soulless body!

keep writing :D

[Arooj Purra]

thank you dear.