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A Poem by Arrinae

Swinging, swinging...

All around...

My ears are ringing...

Stop the sound.

Head is tingling...

I am bound...

Why am I hanging...

Above the ground?

I hear banging...

Have I been found?

Steel clashing...

On the mound...

Water splashing...

Please don't drown.

© 2013 Arrinae


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Wow this Poem gave me grouse bumps, its slightly dark and yet have some light in it. its really well done and pinned to perfection in my eyes.

Posted 5 Years Ago


Arrinae

5 Years Ago

Thank you, this peice is definately perfect forwhat I had been going for. That fact surprised me tho.. read more
Wowzers! This is amazing! There's a dark tale within and yet, it reads with a light sense of humor. Thank you for sharing. Very well penned.

Posted 5 Years Ago


Arrinae

5 Years Ago

Thank you! I'm glad you like it.
easy to follow flows well and has a nice scary twist :) nice. like it

Posted 5 Years Ago


Arrinae

5 Years Ago

Thanks! I'm glad you do!

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Added on May 28, 2013
Last Updated on May 28, 2013
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Arrinae
Arrinae

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So a little bit about me... I am a big supporter of the U.S. Military. I have odd, weird, and interesting dreams that often inspire my writing in unique, though usually dark and tragic,ways. I.. more..

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