What Has Become Of Me?

A man turning into a werewolf but tries to deny it.

Was it wrong what I have done?

Was it wrong to do that?

I cannot help myself, no.

I cannot control myself.

I look down at my reflection,

People see me as a normal person.

I see myself as a monster, a beast.

What has become of me?

Howling in the moonlight, letting the moon be my master.

Eating the flesh of inoccent people.

Chasing after more victims to devour.

No one will believe me.

I hide my true feelings

I hide who I am at night.

But I always look back,

And see if anyone's following me.

What has become of me?

Am I truly a monster?

Have I really done all those things?

Are people following me?

Just to avenge their fallen loved ones?

Yes.

I truly am a monster.

I did do all those things.

I prey on innocent victims.

I let the moon be my master.

I eat the flesh from my prey.

What has become of me...?

I cannot control.

Reviews

[LegitFlyingTaco]

I myself can relate to this a bit. I believe many of us feel like monsters on the inside. Wanting to break free from what is not ourselves on the outside. Always having that one secret nagging at you to be set free. I love this poem. It is so true. Very nice write. (:

[Perfect Mistake]

Beautifully written. Very descriptive. To me it tells a story of something that was once inocent but is now a monster. Very good work.

[Katelyn]

I love this poem because I can relate. This is honest and raw. Beautiful piece. Keep up the great work!

[Artemis Lykaios Nightsh..]

LOL RachelKim. And Thanx Jamillet and LOL xD

[_]

What has become of me...?

I cannot control.


I love that line, only because i can relate :)
i don't know what comes over me once i set my eyes upon...
chocolate! and agreeing with RachelKim here, HELLO DOWN THERE :D

[RachelKim]

I am in complete awe right now.... god..why is everyone so talented here!! Keep writing!!!