The Rainbow of Chaos called Life

dedicated to my family

 

I want to leap and escape...

plunge into the ocean, let it unravel my soul..

so that it can feel no more pain,

so that the waves of heartbreak and suffering

can be dispersed into infinite pieces.

 

Let calmness instil its ferocious claws against my skin,

Let the heart be fortified by the armour of time,

For as I await that my heart is cleansed and purified by the ocean,

I walk in the obscure daydream of this world.

 

And as the rainbow of chaos continues to circulate around my beloved,

I can subsist here with hope and with prayer,

Resting all on to you, my eternal companion,

my passion, my saviour, my love.

Reviews

[The Archangel Gabriel]

That's simply beautiful. Oh, the trials and tribulations of Earthly existence! I like to say that it all sort of makes sense at some level or another - you have to die of something. But, this is little consolation for people who are gravely ill or who have a loved one who is in need of medical attention.

I love your title about chaos - I have spent years studying "chaos theory," the theory that if you know what you are doing, you can discern patterns in what appears to be chaos in the universe.

I will cast a healing spell for your aunt - I can make no promises, but they usually work against the odds. It is an eternal battle to heal people only to have them become ill once again and eventually die. With 6 billion people, it is probably impossible to help everybody all the time. But, I believe strongly that there is a better world awaiting us all just past the next rainbow.

I really like the first stanza:

"I want to leap and escape...
plunge into the ocean, let it unravel my soul..
so that it can feel no more pain,
so that the waves of heartbreak and suffering
can be dispersed into infinite pieces."

That really sets the mood well for the rest of the poem.

Best of luck to your aunt.

Peace and love,
Gabe

[Coyote Poetry]

A excellent poem. I could feel the the desire to be clean and hope to walk unafraid again.
Coyote

[Vatsayayana]

Beautifully described.
Intense.
I love your imagery. Such strength and passion within your words.
Exquisitely done.

[An owl on the moon]

Such powerful imagery, plunged into the sea, surrounded by a rushing peace, and purified. Such a sacred stillness comes from your words.

[Micheal Teal]

This is a soul nourishing poem that is sincere and authentic. There is an immense sense of spirit and beauty within your words. My thoughts and prayers are with your aunt and family.

[Emily B]

This is beautiful. So well-said. Such prayerful artistry is beyond my description.

[Gandré]

beautiful piece, my dear. I think you wrote amazingly healing spell.
luv, be with me soon.