Heart of Cheating

Heart of Cheating

A Poem by ArundassTP
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Cheating contaminates this world

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Destroying, beautiful garden
barren;
Scorpions and Centipedes;
Poison;
Never ever feels others heart;
Warmth;
Moves behind the door;
Always;
Tracking others pleasures;
Pure

© 2020 ArundassTP


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This is an amazing poem. Quite unlike anything I've read & that's high points in my book. It's a little surprising when your msg goes from negative to positive, but then the two halves are so balanced, it all feels like a natural juxtaposition, two sides of a coin. I've NEVER heard anyone use scorpions & centipedes to symbolize cheaters, but I can't think of more ugly & disgusting creatures. I try to heed the Buddhist creed to respect all sentient beings, but I simply cannot stand certain bugs. It's a remarkable talent to use just a couple words & conjure up so much palpable disgust, the reader feels like shuddering. Nicely done (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

Posted 1 Month Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

ArundassTP

1 Month Ago

Thanks friend; Buddhists, Hinduism, Jainism, and related religions derived out of ancient wisdom see.. read more
barleygirl

1 Month Ago

To be honest, I'm entertained by your way of explaining. You are quite an unusual character in many .. read more



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Great form, symmetry, cadence, use of language and imagery here ArundassTP. Deep symbolism of these creatures felt. On the surface benign, but venomous beneath as are cheaters-yes. Excellent write.

Posted 1 Month Ago


ArundassTP

1 Month Ago

Thanks friend
A pure pleasure to read this one.... How different emotion can entangle and observing merely one's own emotion can be treacherous

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ArundassTP

1 Month Ago

thank you friend
This is an amazing poem. Quite unlike anything I've read & that's high points in my book. It's a little surprising when your msg goes from negative to positive, but then the two halves are so balanced, it all feels like a natural juxtaposition, two sides of a coin. I've NEVER heard anyone use scorpions & centipedes to symbolize cheaters, but I can't think of more ugly & disgusting creatures. I try to heed the Buddhist creed to respect all sentient beings, but I simply cannot stand certain bugs. It's a remarkable talent to use just a couple words & conjure up so much palpable disgust, the reader feels like shuddering. Nicely done (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

Posted 1 Month Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

ArundassTP

1 Month Ago

Thanks friend; Buddhists, Hinduism, Jainism, and related religions derived out of ancient wisdom see.. read more
barleygirl

1 Month Ago

To be honest, I'm entertained by your way of explaining. You are quite an unusual character in many .. read more
it is like two poems in one. The one word lines signify how pleasures might be pure, but only pure pleasure.
Loyalty and truth and love are given up when the cheating occurs.
j.

Posted 1 Month Ago


ArundassTP

1 Month Ago

thank you friend
Very true, cheating is a rotting taste of reality. Your poem really paints a picture in the reader's mind. I read this twice and liked it even more. tyfs

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ArundassTP

1 Month Ago

thank you friend.
Now I really follow this piece in its intention although I may be misreading it. I read the lines and assumed the following line single word described that line? I was then thrown by 'Never feels other's heart' 'Warmth' as I envisaged 'cold/ice' and also 'tracking other's pleasures' I could not associate the word 'pure' with?

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ArundassTP

1 Month Ago

Pure; For a person his own thoughts, Ideas, Expectation, Destination etc etc signifies purity. Becau.. read more

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Added on November 22, 2020
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ArundassTP
ArundassTP

Tellicherry, Kerala, India



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Creative, imaginative and expressive; i love to write poetry, short stories and Short essays. I am also a photographer, traveller and gardener and I do data work from Desktop; and also translates from.. more..

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