Aggression

Think a hundred times; why I am in aggressive mood before action

Thunder follows storm

sweep the wisdom, far away;

Power of thousand elephants;

Crumbles the wall too strong;

beautiful is it? Once!

In the abyss of dust of agony;

Strikes the lightning too hard;

Burning the roots;

for a minor misunderstanding;

for a minor misjudgement;

Reviews

[Einstein Noodle]

mmmmmmm anger and aggression ... so destructive ... words and limbs fly and strike and can never be taken back .. i love how you have emphasized this age old wisdom to think (or better ..pray) before we speak .. i am enjoying your precise poetry Arundass TP ... and quite the moniker if i do say so myself .. glad we have met!
E.

[ArundassTP]

thank you friend.

[Light and Ashes]

Such a great write!!!!!.....

[ArundassTP]

Thanks friend

[Light and Ashes]

You're welcome! :)

[Neville]

.... I have seen far too many tragedies that have occurred as a result of flash anger .. it is just not worth it.. it is though worth exploring alternative ways of responding to frustration, stress and hurt ... Having said that, you ask a good question and you have penned a cool poem.. very original my friend ...

[ArundassTP]

Thanks friend

[Neville]

..................... you are most welcome

[Chris Shaw]

You certainly describe aggression very creatively here. Power of a thousand elephants is quite something. It is so destructive. Always best to take a step backwards and take the heat out of a situation. Otherwise the damage could be permanent. Niceittke composition here.

Chris

[ArundassTP]

Thanks friend

[Coyote Poetry]

I understand the poem. I hold in, a lot of anger. I tried to release. Can't be done. The poem touched many emotions. I believe, we must learn to live with some aggression. Thank you for sharing the amazing poetry. Made me think this late evening in Michigan.
Coyote

[ArundassTP]

Thanks friend

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome my friend.

[.]

Yes, the root cause of any destruction... Aggression does nothing but only harm
Beautiful poem on outstanding wisdom

[ArundassTP]

Thanks friend

[barleygirl]

A young person at the cafe asked me how I deal with reviews that do not feel good. I said, if I feel like I'm about to have a REACTION -- I just don't go there. If I can't calm down to respond, then I come back later when I can. We all need to calm down before lashing out, which has become so prevalent these days! Thanks for highlighting this societal scourge (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

[ArundassTP]

Thanks friend

[An owl on the moon]

Your guidance is a deep wisdom we all need to savor in this life of intense emotion and lips that let fly before contemplation. Thank you for these deep lines of life.

[ArundassTP]

Thank you friend

[Cyprian Van Dyke]

Power of a thousand elephants. - I like that line.

You make a lot of poetic sense literally - if you know what I mean. Your poetry is real, it speaks truth and has meaning. Tyfs

[ArundassTP]

Thank you friend

[Walter G Pedersen]

Sounded intriguing with the power of aggression. Wonderful work, keep it up.

[ArundassTP]

Thank you friend.