Meditation

Meditation

A Poem by Arundass TP
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During meditation...

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Inside dark cave,
In the abyss of darkness; relaxed;
Hanging Lantern on one hand;
The path seem's never ending;
Walked through strange path;
Experiencing vivid art forms;
Until the door's are opened;
Experiencing the first ray;
From the Sun God.

© 2020 Arundass TP


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I never experience anything like this associated with sleep, but this reminds me of meditation. Dark cave is the place where outside distractions are finally neutralized. Lantern is enlightenment sought. Vivid art forms is a state of mind where we process in imagery, not words. Finally, opening doors to the outside world again, hoping to be able to carry with me the light from the Sun God (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Arundass TP

3 Years Ago

Thanks. Now I think I have to change title of this poem.
barleygirl

3 Years Ago

I can't believe you did! I feel honored!
Arundass TP

3 Years Ago

Thanks friend. You showed me right path



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Thank you Arundass
A poem is like sharing the meditation experience or a brief guide to the secrets of meditation!
Thanks for sharing!

Posted 6 Months Ago


Arundass TP

6 Months Ago

Thank you friend 😊
Interesting sequences has an eerie familiar ring to it:/

Posted 3 Years Ago


Arundass TP

3 Years Ago

Thank you friend
Oh this speaks to my soul and I am excited by it. This poem I really love! I am there in the cave, feeling awed and reassured by the Sun God's rays

Posted 3 Years Ago


Helen

3 Years Ago

What was the original title of the poem?
Arundass TP

3 Years Ago

It was related with dream. Dream itself. Thanks friend
....Very intriguing write here, I really like this. awesome write

Posted 3 Years Ago


Arundass TP

3 Years Ago

Thank you friend
Just Kim

3 Years Ago

not a problem, i hope you have a wonderful day
nice meditation. deep. no better light than that. god is light and it is his sun. you'll never go wrong walking with him. i enjoyed this piece ... :)

Posted 3 Years Ago


Arundass TP

3 Years Ago

Thank you for reading my poetry and review it
The depictions of the darkness and the limited view by the lantern added a great element of mystery. I liked how so much of this poem revolved around what I didn't know. In the end...they sun cam through and it felt as if I had forgotten what its warmth felt like. Almost as if I had been in the cold so long that I had grown desensitized to it.

Posted 3 Years Ago


Arundass TP

3 Years Ago

Thank you friend
Very striking images Arundass. Is the first part of this a description of meditation with all the ups and downs. Does the final part with the sun's rays mean that enlightenment has come.
Take care.
Alan

Posted 3 Years Ago


Arundass TP

3 Years Ago

Thank you friend


................ an interesting poem my friend ... and very much enjoyed .... Neville

Posted 3 Years Ago


Arundass TP

3 Years Ago

Thank you friend
Neville

3 Years Ago


... You are most welcome ...
A fitting title, it goes with the poem in such a poetic way. tyfs

Posted 3 Years Ago


Arundass TP

3 Years Ago

Thank you friend

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Added on December 22, 2020
Last Updated on December 23, 2020
Tags: Psychology, Poem, Poetry, Dream

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Arundass TP
Arundass TP

Thalassery, Kerala, India



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