Meditation

During meditation...

Inside dark cave,
In the abyss of darkness; relaxed;
Hanging Lantern on one hand;
The path seem's never ending;
Walked through strange path;
Experiencing vivid art forms;
Until the door's are opened;
Experiencing the first ray;
From the Sun God.

Reviews

[barleygirl]

I never experience anything like this associated with sleep, but this reminds me of meditation. Dark cave is the place where outside distractions are finally neutralized. Lantern is enlightenment sought. Vivid art forms is a state of mind where we process in imagery, not words. Finally, opening doors to the outside world again, hoping to be able to carry with me the light from the Sun God (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

[ArundassTP]

Thanks. Now I think I have to change title of this poem.

[barleygirl]

I can't believe you did! I feel honored!

[ArundassTP]

Thanks friend. You showed me right path

[Robert Trakofler]

Interesting sequences has an eerie familiar ring to it:/

[ArundassTP]

Thank you friend

[Helen]

Oh this speaks to my soul and I am excited by it. This poem I really love! I am there in the cave, feeling awed and reassured by the Sun God's rays

[Helen]

What was the original title of the poem?

[ArundassTP]

It was related with dream. Dream itself. Thanks friend

[Just Kim]

....Very intriguing write here, I really like this. awesome write

[ArundassTP]

Thank you friend

[Just Kim]

not a problem, i hope you have a wonderful day

[Pete]

nice meditation. deep. no better light than that. god is light and it is his sun. you'll never go wrong walking with him. i enjoyed this piece ... :)

[ArundassTP]

Thank you for reading my poetry and review it

[Zeitgeist Manifesto]

The depictions of the darkness and the limited view by the lantern added a great element of mystery. I liked how so much of this poem revolved around what I didn't know. In the end...they sun cam through and it felt as if I had forgotten what its warmth felt like. Almost as if I had been in the cold so long that I had grown desensitized to it.

[ArundassTP]

Thank you friend

[alanwgraham]

Very striking images Arundass. Is the first part of this a description of meditation with all the ups and downs. Does the final part with the sun's rays mean that enlightenment has come.
Take care.
Alan

[ArundassTP]

Thank you friend

[Neville]

................ an interesting poem my friend ... and very much enjoyed .... Neville

[ArundassTP]

Thank you friend

[Neville]

... You are most welcome ...

[Cyprian Van Dyke]

A fitting title, it goes with the poem in such a poetic way. tyfs

[ArundassTP]

Thank you friend

[Miss Sharon]

Nicely done. Good descriptive writing. ~Sharon

[ArundassTP]

Thank you friend