Rainy  days

Rainy days

A Poem by Arundass TP
"

are happiest days

"
Let me sing a song from heart
In a dancing floor with full of dancers
With violent turns and violent twists
With touching steps faster and swifter.

So let it rain in the mid of night
In the mid of day, with lightning
Soaking heart, in flash floods live
Jumping beats, Jumping high.

Rolling bodies nude and pristine
Heavenly touch, the heart of tears
Shiny eyes, opens the door
Rainy days are happier days

© 2024 Arundass TP


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Rainy days can be happier days if you make them so; dancing and twisting and jiving “ soaking heart, in flash floods live”……there is something enlightening about the rain…it gives you a vibe…for dancing and perhaps some sensual trysting as well….lovely
Warmly, B

Posted 3 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Arundass TP

3 Months Ago

Thank you friend 😊
Betty Hermelee

3 Months Ago

You're very welcome TP
Warmly, B



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Love the imagery! Love that it made me realize that I totally wasted the last rainy day ...

Posted 3 Weeks Ago


Arundass TP

3 Weeks Ago

Thank you friend 😊
I like it when it rains heavily at night, and I am lying in bed and thinking Thank The Good Lord I am not out in that. Excellent Work ✨️✨️✨️✨️✨️

Posted 2 Months Ago


Arundass TP

2 Months Ago

Thank you friend 😊


I have danced in the rain many times .. and it sure beats dancing on the dance floor .. Neville

Posted 2 Months Ago


Arundass TP

2 Months Ago

Thank you friend ☺️
Neville

2 Months Ago


.......... You are most welcome .. Neville
I like the imagery here. I love rains too and totally agree Rainy days are happier days. Nothing like, when it rains and everything around comes alive, it's like a festival of happiness when everything in nature is getting a dip :) Thanks for sharing.

Posted 2 Months Ago


Arundass TP

2 Months Ago

Thank you friend 😊
Abhilash Hegde

2 Months Ago

you're very welcome, warm wishes friend.
a contemplative write. i think we were meant to be one with nature. innocent rainy days make us stop, look and listen taking stock of life. well said, good flow and enjoyed.

Posted 2 Months Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Arundass TP

2 Months Ago

Thank you friend 😊
great writting thanks for the love

Posted 2 Months Ago


Arundass TP

2 Months Ago

Thank you friend 😊
I love the rain, the feeling, scent and touch of it on my face and your poem brings out the great joy that is to be experienced by immersing oneself to the full in enjoying a beautiful rainy day. Well expressed, you paint the picture of a rainy day very artistically. Thank you for sharing, T. P... Lovely work!

Posted 3 Months Ago


Arundass TP

2 Months Ago

Thank you friend 😊
Mariej

2 Months Ago

Welcome always, T. P...
If you've got roiling nude bodies inside, who cares about the weather?

Posted 3 Months Ago


Arundass TP

3 Months Ago

Thank you friend 😊. Ha . Sure.
The exuberance within the wording comes through and plays out behind my eyes... this left a smile behind.

Posted 3 Months Ago


Arundass TP

3 Months Ago

Thank you friend 😊
Rainy days can be happier days if you make them so; dancing and twisting and jiving “ soaking heart, in flash floods live”……there is something enlightening about the rain…it gives you a vibe…for dancing and perhaps some sensual trysting as well….lovely
Warmly, B

Posted 3 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Arundass TP

3 Months Ago

Thank you friend 😊
Betty Hermelee

3 Months Ago

You're very welcome TP
Warmly, B

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Arundass TP
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Thalassery, Kerala, India



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