Rainbow

Rainbow

A Poem by Arundass TP
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The colors of heaven

"
When she lies on the blue sky nude
Over the clouds, when the Sun kisses
Poet's sing a song over her beautiful colours
Looking the sky cloudy, standing over the mountain.

She never lies there long, she is blurred
Into the heavens, dancing allover
She lies visual only when sun is emotional
Touching her body to taste heavenly colours.

Seeing, dreaming, Poet's search for word's
Unlocking the abyss of soul,
Heats it,  cools it adding honey and Nectar
Gives the world to quench the eternal thirst

© 2024 Arundass TP


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The Poet living in a beautiful place it seems 😅...
To me the poem itself saying two ideas.. "The sun masculine do have qualities of feminine that is gently exposed when there is to be time"....
Other way is ..." it just for a moment, but remainders are in our memory "...
It's like exploration...



Posted 1 Month Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Arundass TP

1 Month Ago

Thank you friend 😊



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I can only imagine these amazing words you created when you think what heaven looks like and it is simply gorgeous...." she lies visual only when the sun is emotional"....great line....
Thank you TP for sharing this very visual poem...

Posted 1 Day Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Arundass TP

1 Day Ago

Thank you friend 😊
this is a great meta-poem, talking about what inspires poetry. nature, beauty, love are certainly things everybody gets inspiration from. Poet's search for words, to try and use their vocabulary to describe the magnificence they bear witness to, is a challenge undertaken with joy. but people are always wanting and wanting 'to quench the eternal thirst...' very well said, and very well written. this is as beautiful as a rainbow.

Posted 2 Weeks Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Arundass TP

2 Weeks Ago

Thank you friend 😊
"she is blurred into the heavens"..."touching her body to taste heavenly colours"..I don't think I've ever read such beauty! This is chilling with its sensual flickers. I love it!

Posted 1 Month Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Arundass TP

1 Month Ago

Thank you friend
The Poet living in a beautiful place it seems 😅...
To me the poem itself saying two ideas.. "The sun masculine do have qualities of feminine that is gently exposed when there is to be time"....
Other way is ..." it just for a moment, but remainders are in our memory "...
It's like exploration...



Posted 1 Month Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Arundass TP

1 Month Ago

Thank you friend 😊
excellent work. i was taken away with your words and imagery. such depth. wonderful and much enjoyed.

Posted 1 Month Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Arundass TP

1 Month Ago

Thank you friend 😊
Yes the wonderment of a sky's multitude of colors is definitely a poet's palette.

Posted 1 Month Ago


Arundass TP

1 Month Ago

Thank you friend 😊
ATP, I am definitely going to look at the sky more carefully after reading this one.

Posted 1 Month Ago


Arundass TP

1 Month Ago

Thank you friend. Sky's are like magician changing colors. Have a nice day.
What a stunning rainbow you have so poetically penned in both word and imagery in this stunning poetic piece, dear T. P... BEAUTIFUL poetic gem! Thank you for sharing, dear T. P...

Posted 1 Month Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Arundass TP

1 Month Ago

Thank you friend 😊
Marie

1 Month Ago

Most welcome always, dear friend :))
beautiful.
some lines are just too stunning..

Posted 1 Month Ago


Arundass TP

1 Month Ago

Thank you friend 😊
light and ashes

1 Month Ago

You are very welcome..
Amazing and beautiful described in your words. I could see the beauty and the wonder. Thank you my friend for sharing the outstanding poetry.
Coyote

Posted 1 Month Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Arundass TP

1 Month Ago

Thank you friend 😊

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Added on October 9, 2024
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Arundass TP
Arundass TP

Thalassery, Kerala, India



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