A person within you

A person within you

A Poem by Arundass TP
"

Lives within forever

"
A person within you
Talks endless
When sun moves over the sky
When moon moves over the sky.

A person within you
Shows a world never existed
While you walk, thinking you live
While you sleep, thinking it's dream.

A person within you
Tells all your wishes
That you never expects
That you never demands

A person within you
Tells all lies as it is true
That you behave accordingly
That you feel accordingly.

A person within you
Hacks your existence
Takes you to the top of a mountain
Pulls you down unexpectedly.

A person within you
Is neither God nor devil
It's a clever self
Living with you forever.

© 2024 Arundass TP


My Review

Would you like to review this Poem?
Login | Register




Featured Review

a very interestingly done poem, a person within a person, inner voice perhaps. the everyday, every time the voice or the other self that holds us back or pushes us further. It's a question to be or not to be. which is right, which isn't or doesn't matter. the write captures this dilemma beautifully and reminds us that there's that entity within us, always there, the presence is known but the outcomes are unknown. well done! Thanks for sharing, TP!

Posted 1 Month Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Arundass TP

1 Month Ago

Thank you friend 😊



Reviews

Our inner voice from little to our older self we hear and see and have loved it. We sometimes dont want to hear it and do things otherwise but its always there, our life force, the energy behind this body matter which will decay. That will always be there and transcend into other life too probably ! Can any other thing be as loyal to us than this clever living thing inside us. Our scriptures and fablesa have spoken at length about this aham/ego, about Aham Brahmasmi but we haven’t been able to quieten it! Simple, cute yet very deep my dear!

Posted 2 Months Ago


Arundass TP

2 Months Ago

Thank you friend 😊

Yes, your conscience is with you for your whole life. After death, the evil spirit returns to Hell and the good spirit escorts us to the Father of All Life who judges us. If we believe in Jesus, then HIS blood totally abolishes every sin for eternity! God does not and will not co-exist with sin.

Posted 2 Months Ago


Arundass TP

2 Months Ago

Thank you friend 😊
GlendaK

2 Months Ago

Awesome write my friend! :)
This is a good piece. I enjoyed the flow of it.

Posted 2 Months Ago


Arundass TP

2 Months Ago

Thank you friend 😊
i remember when my therapist suddenly asked me: 'did you have an imaginary friend when you were a child?' my answer: yes... and i think he's still there. i talk to him endlessly, sometimes for hours and he provides me insights that i swear i did not think of. he is an amazing friend and mentor and i could not live without. not everyone's inner voice is like a guardian angel, but a more demonic one, as your verse explores. i guess i am lucky to have this wise and positive energy inside me.

Posted 2 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Arundass TP

2 Months Ago

Sure. Thank you friend 😊
An admission of blatant deviousness, hiding in a fog of Thisisme! Such a fine write, however. Words in keen order, admission lone, no fee for saying the truth and - almost but.

Posted 2 Months Ago


Arundass TP

2 Months Ago

Thank you friend 😊
emmajoygreen

2 Months Ago

You're welcome. Need catch up with reviews.. now's the time whilst I have it!
My feeling is that this amazing poem is about EGO and I wonder if I am incorrect, dear T. P.?
A very valid, purposeful write from your poetic pen. I enjoyed reading very much and thank you for sharing, dear poet... Lovely work!

Posted 2 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Arundass TP

2 Months Ago

Yes, I wàs thinking about Sigmund Freud and egos while writing. Thank you friend 😊
Marie

2 Months Ago

Most welcome always, dear T. P... Great write! Thank you for sharing, dear friend...
Words on your conscience. Clever and meaningful.

Posted 2 Months Ago


Arundass TP

2 Months Ago

Thank you friend 😊

2
next Next Page
last Last Page
Share This
Email
Facebook
Twitter
Request Read Request
Add to Library My Library
Subscribe Subscribe


Stats

268 Views
18 Reviews
Rating
Shelved in 1 Library
Added on December 10, 2024
Last Updated on December 10, 2024
Tags: Poetry

Author

Arundass TP
Arundass TP

Thalassery, Kerala, India



About
I am mad enough to write With a pen half filled ink On a torned paper I got Leaving others mad to read Inside the fantasies where I live. more..

Writing
Life Life

A Poem by Arundass TP



Related Writing

People who liked this story also liked..


Real Steel Real Steel

A Poem by A.H.