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Born as Slave

Born as Slave

A Poem by Arundass TP
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Under Sun

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Born as slave
Under Sun and Moon
I crawl all over
Hearing others voices
Rebelling all voices
I am slave of my own thoughts
So powerful, misleading
Through strange paths
Wishing to see beautiful heaven
Through bitterness!​

© 2025 Arundass TP


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your bitterness arises from your time as a slave, and it doesn’t disappear immediately: sometimes it takes a life time to realize your suffering…a slave to your own thoughts…..even though bitter, you still wish to open Heaven’s gates… and your bitterness might just fade into nothing…
nice write!
Warmly
B🌷🌷🌷

Posted 2 Days Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Arundass TP

1 Day Ago

Thank you friend 😊
Betty Hermelee

1 Day Ago

You are very welcome!!!
Warmly, B



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your bitterness arises from your time as a slave, and it doesn’t disappear immediately: sometimes it takes a life time to realize your suffering…a slave to your own thoughts…..even though bitter, you still wish to open Heaven’s gates… and your bitterness might just fade into nothing…
nice write!
Warmly
B🌷🌷🌷

Posted 2 Days Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Arundass TP

1 Day Ago

Thank you friend 😊
Betty Hermelee

1 Day Ago

You are very welcome!!!
Warmly, B
It has always been interesting to me how my thoughts can control me. They are my experiences that create them, they have never been there in person, but their decisions shape me in every moment and in every matter. If you can't control the power and it controls you, it's called hubris syndrome, that must be what they called the one for thoughts. I loved your poem, sir!

Posted 3 Days Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Arundass TP

2 Days Ago

Thank you friend 😊
There are many different types of slavery.
Well done..

Posted 5 Days Ago


Arundass TP

3 Days Ago

Sure, Thànk you friend 😊
Light and ashes

3 Days Ago

Welcome...
well written, "I am slave of my own thoughts" , quite a powerful thought. thanks for writing and sharing this.

Posted 5 Days Ago


Arundass TP

3 Days Ago

Thank you friend 😊
Wow. Powerful and poignant.

Posted 1 Week Ago


Arundass TP

1 Week Ago

Thank you friend 😊
"I am slave of my own thoughts" I feel this a lot. Nicely done

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1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Arundass TP

1 Week Ago

Thank you friend 😊
Wow. That was beautiful. Really resonated with me.

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Arundass TP

1 Week Ago

Thank you friend 😊
Our emotions can certainly play havoc with our thinking and feeling. Over thinking can be exhausting. Being a slave to our own out of control thoughts isn’t fun.

Chris

Posted 1 Week Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Arundass TP

1 Week Ago

Sure, Thank you friend 😊
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MCS
We are all so good at undermining ourselves. Well penned my friend.


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Arundass TP

1 Week Ago

Thank you friend 😊
So very true. We are our own enemies sometimes. Couldn’t have put this better.

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Arundass TP

1 Week Ago

Thank you friend for encouraging review

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Added on January 24, 2025
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Arundass TP
Arundass TP

Thalassery, Kerala, India



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