Never to Return

Never to Return

A Poem by Asderathos
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An image of crushing sorrow, like some scene from a movie that you would have to have a literally insane actress that could actually inflict the emotions upon herself to perform.

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Red construction paper valentines 

 

Pouring from a crumpled chest

Breast broken 

 

Subtle sadness cracking 

Sad smiles 

Into a tortured mask

 

Of worlds lost 

by the absence of one

 

Never, 

Never to return

 

10-2-10

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© 2010 Asderathos


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Even in this short poem you have expressed clearly the 'crushing sorrow' of losing a person you love (whether through the end of a relationship by growing apart or even through death).
This poem reads and flows well - I like the descriptions and images created.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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Even in this short poem you have expressed clearly the 'crushing sorrow' of losing a person you love (whether through the end of a relationship by growing apart or even through death).
This poem reads and flows well - I like the descriptions and images created.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Asderathos

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