Love Similes in Games

Love Similes in Games

A Poem by Ashadan
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A poem having a semi-sonnet format

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Blissfulness you felt on a Candy Crush,
Where Sugar Crush is as sweet as your smile;
Allure you have is like a Diamond Dash,
And like in Tetris having a good pile,
Picture I.Q. surely not make one snore.
For it needs focus to answer it all;
Like your looks that has revealing galore,
That catches attention like a super mall;
Having you is like in Social Empires.
Where I need good strategies to prove my worth.
That even I'm from GnomeTown, I'm a sire,
 And for God's sake, I'm a king not a smurf.
                 If our love is in the Criminal Case,
                 This will be the crime they can never chase.

          

© 2015 Ashadan


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very figurative and open to interpretation - like it :)

Posted 8 Years Ago


Ashadan

8 Years Ago

I'm glad for your compliments . Thank you for stopping by =)
What a way to describe someone of beauty and intelligence. Clever write :)

Posted 8 Years Ago


Ashadan

8 Years Ago

thank you! Than you for stopping by. ^_^ Be well out there
very good! intriguing style, but if i may, have you tried 'free verse' ? This sounds excellent at the moment, because of the imagery it brings, if you had done this in say... free verse, it would be 100/100. you get 90 from me! but keep up the good work, i hope to see more!

Posted 8 Years Ago


Ashadan

8 Years Ago

thank your review ^_^ .. Be well. Im glad that you read it =)
Beautiful:) Its really a nice write. You get 100 points from me.

Posted 8 Years Ago


Ashadan

8 Years Ago

hehehe, Thank you so much For that Inspiring review. I'm glad to be acquainted with great writers li.. read more
Dani The Unreviewed

8 Years Ago

You are welcome:) and thanks. I'm not that great though...but thank you:)
Ashadan

8 Years Ago

You're always welcome =)
I love the playfulness of your words... the games of thoughts... and the structure lends itself perfectly, giving your work both a fresh and ancient feel. So well done.

Posted 8 Years Ago


Ashadan

8 Years Ago

thank you for stopping by.. I'm glad that you like it ^_^
Very clever use of game titles in this playfully written poem. Lydi**

Posted 8 Years Ago


Ashadan

8 Years Ago

Thank for your short comment yet it gives me an inspiration to continue writing =)
Play with Games, Just an outstanding play.
Good one friend, But I only understand the cricket language.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Ashadan

8 Years Ago

Thank you =) Thank you for stopping by
I'm playing fifa as we speak and love the game metaphor:)
Great piece of work thanks for sharing and b-blessed!

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Ashadan

8 Years Ago

I'm glad that you checked on it. I appreciated the effort ^_^ Thanks
A bit aimed at game players, and seems silly to one who is not. However, if the object of your affection is a gamer, in that case this is a winning strategy.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Ashadan

8 Years Ago

thank you for your review, I only have this poem since I observed that mostly teenagers today are Te.. read more
Nice use of thoughts create a interesting and fun poem to read. You did very well create good place and vision with your words. I did like the ending. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 8 Years Ago


Ashadan

8 Years Ago

Thank you for stopping by. you're comment added another push in my mind to continue writing :)
Coyote Poetry

8 Years Ago

I'm glad and you are welcome. Writing is a lifetime goal. We are always learning.
Ashadan

8 Years Ago

definitely true !!!!!

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Added on April 20, 2015
Last Updated on April 26, 2015
Tags: Love, Games, Attraction, Methapor, Simile, Faith, Beauty, Adoration

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Ashadan
Ashadan

Philippines



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I am simple man that only wants to inspire others true writing. I am a poet wanted to be from the Philippines. I am teenager at heart ^_^ just joking. Ashadan is just my pen name since I started writ.. more..

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