Sloth (Seven Deadly Sins Series)

A Senryu.

Words can be daunting

Both in coming and going.

Simply let me doze…

Author's Note

I have challenged myself to write poems for each of the Seven Deadly Sins, each in a different form. A Senryu seemed perfect for Sloth. Comments? Suggestions?

Reviews

[Igarin]

LOL...I love this short and sweet, indeed signifying sloth...

[Ashira Macy]

Haha, thank you! This one gave me the idea for the series.

[Marie]

I see what you mean. A senyru is short and doesn't require much writing.But of course a senyru can be quite a challenge to a really slothful person.

[Ashira Macy]

Very true. I considered making Sloth's poem simply "zzzzzzzzzz..." but I thought that might be going a little too far with it.

[John Preston]

And so our little girl
she needed to doze

[Ashira Macy]

Yes sir! This was the easiest to write (not surprisingly).

[John Preston]

If all where like that.

[Priscilla Nishi]

Seven deadly sins? Wow! Great idea... Nyc work

[Ashira Macy]

Thanks Priscilla, glad you enjoyed this.

[raj24]

for a lazy person everything is same... words or no words he will always enjoy his own company.. short and to the point.. nice work Ashira :)

Raj

[Ashira Macy]

Thanks for reading and reviewing Raj!