A Poem by Ashira Macy

I have been in Alaska the past week and have been majorly inspired.


Long have I heard

Of misty mountains’ majesty,

But it never dawned fully

Until I saw her there in Juneau.


Jutting up in magnificent grandeur -

Clouds hung around her in adoration,

Kissing her face

As two streams of crystal tears

Trickled down her jade cheeks

In awe of her own splendor.


I sighed and breathed in

Her earthy perfume

As I swam in serenity.

© 2014 Ashira Macy

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What an alluring asseveration of the nature that surrounded you! Your words were so clear, so elegant. I just want to read this poem over and over again. There is such artistry and grace in your words. This piece truly touched my heart and I just can't say enough about it I am going to shut up now :P

Posted 7 Years Ago

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Ashira Macy

7 Years Ago

Aw, thank you so much my friend, you are so sweet! I am happy you liked it!


No suggestions, keep it as it is. You made me see it

Posted 2 Years Ago

i am so jealous ;) Alaska calls to many for sure but she is a siren to me .. very enjoyable personifications start to finish .. i can feel the peace you are breathing deep in ..nice job..thanks for sharing this experience

Posted 6 Years Ago

This is really really beautiful! :)

Posted 6 Years Ago

Beautiful...visual and captivating. I really like the softness here bit also the potent energy, gorgeous :)

Posted 6 Years Ago

I thought this was kissing a girl, but then I read the caption and the comments and oh you're describing a mountain, nevertheless, I did enjoy it ;)

Posted 6 Years Ago

i think you did a good job of bringing the setting to life

and placing the reader within the heart of its majestic world, as from the authors POV

great job

Posted 6 Years Ago

Quite nicely penned. I like the narcissistic element you portrayed in this. Your eloquence amazed me throughout. I think this is quite an opus!

Posted 6 Years Ago

Very elegant, very well done.

Posted 7 Years Ago

Beautiful depiction, simply one of the best depictions. Impressed. :)

Posted 7 Years Ago

Great rhyme scheme here. Good imagery. Excellent work.

Posted 7 Years Ago

Ashira Macy

7 Years Ago

Thank you.

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Added on August 17, 2014
Last Updated on August 17, 2014
Tags: juneau, alaska, nature, mountain, waterfalls, personification


Ashira Macy
Ashira Macy

Martinez, CA

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