A Poem by Ashira Macy

No, not Peter Pan. =)


Gazing electricity

Through the darkened,

Humid room

While questions stutter

From her lips

And laughter rolls

Off of him in waves.

Not processing the what

Or the why,

Just the who.

All that counts,

Is they are kindred


© 2014 Ashira Macy

Author's Note

Ashira Macy
I feel like my writing is just getting more and more abstract. Either way, enjoy.

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Creativity at its peak!
Lovely write :)

Posted 6 Years Ago

This is one of creative and imaginative work..
Just enjoyed it.

Posted 6 Years Ago

This is so creative! I love the abstract feeling. I'm kind of speechless on how to describe this but I really liked it, it's like I could feel it in my heart

Posted 7 Years Ago

Very different and intriguing. Defiantly enjoyed this one.

Posted 7 Years Ago

its different and so nice...:))

Posted 7 Years Ago

Sometimes the "what", "why" and "how" dont matter.. Its the "who" that matters...
Its different i like it :)

Posted 7 Years Ago

When I saw that this was titled "Pan" I immediately thought of Greek Mythology. Kind of confused on the title. Either way, this is a great work in it's own right. Very cute. Thanks for sharing.

Posted 7 Years Ago

I liked reading this. Thanks for sharing! It's simple and a very pretty poem. I don't get why it's called pan though. Can anyone explain that to me? Thank you.

Posted 7 Years Ago

amazing and wonderful work here keep up the good work your poem had a wonderful flow to it keep on writing

Posted 7 Years Ago

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31 Reviews
Added on November 11, 2014
Last Updated on November 11, 2014
Tags: pan-sexual, lgbt, love, connection, pan


Ashira Macy
Ashira Macy

Martinez, CA

I am 24 years old and just getting back into writing after not using the skill for a few years, so I am a bit rusty. I am excited to share my new work as well as some old with this community and would.. more..

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