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This is a lyric for a new metal band that I'm in. We don't yet have a name, but this is the lyric to the first song that we've completed. Co-written by Stephany Engle.

Please God, hear me.

God, hear me.

Oh my God, please let me die.

 

I deny your way of life.

Damn your existence, damn my strife.

Your toxic induction is my cage.

Your constant presence is my source of rage.

 

My sin is my pain.

I bleed for your disdain.

No more will you destroy in vain.

Your bloody path has left too many slain.

 

My sin is my pain.

I bleed for your disdain.

Now's the time. I end your reign.

You no longer embody my bane.

 

Please God, hear me.

Please God, let me die.

 

Take heed of your visions of blood,

or the life that you love will be bleeding away.

Descend to the rivers that flood,

break the wings of a dove, though I want you to stay.

 

Behold, let the darkness come.

The end has begun as the life leaves your eyes.

Be still in the presence of death.

Your fate is beset as your fleeting breath dies.

 

Now's the time. I end your reign.

You no longer embody my bane.

Author's Note

Keep in mind, it goes to music.

Reviews

[Annebelle Ashire]

wow i have this interesting tune in my head for this piece, it's a sketchy sound because i only just read through it - but I love this piece all together I say Amen to your words!
As I sung it to myself I absolutely love the line,

"You no longer embody my bane."

That statement has so much to offer!
you no longer embody my bane - sounding so much as if you cannot possibly stand the interference of a hand continually lent. To push it away and beg for the chance to see it your way for a change.

As always,
your piece has brought me into thought.
Sincerely,

your Annebelle

[..R.I.P..]

I actually wanna hear what this sounds like with the music. This is yet another great piece.

[chloe cruz]

I love this entirely. God, it's so well written. Wonderful job!

[Ahmad Alhour]

It makes senese - going with music!
Well, its a peace of rage and moments of truth...

Good job Morgan.