Rainy Day

This is just the way I feel and I am sorry if you all disagree with me.

 

Eyes stained;

A life not lived;

Rain falling down;

Washing my sins;

A smile so fake its almost beautiful;

That razor kissed me one to many nights;

It's presence I am oblivious to;

Silver thread;

Infiltrating my skin;

Slithering into my vein;

A rush so real;

Yet it makes a mask so fake;

Ugly face;

Black and blue;

Make up un deserved;

I deserve the scars;

Running in the rain;

With a lullaby in mind;

I lie everywhere;

Asking whataya want from me;

Lifeless-sleepwalking;

Begging someone to rescue me...

Author's Note

This is a poem from my Google+ Page..I was upset and still am....

Reviews

[Shanna Bryant]

I thought it was great! No judgment here. Ever! Keep on rocking!

[melissa]

This is amazing poem keep up the great work i can't wait to read more

[Ashley White]

Thank you my friend for the lovely comment

[melissa]

You're welcome

[Brett Moore]

Wow. I'm right there in this moment with you. The language is emotive and interesting. The pacing/line breaks are really well done and lend a sort of frantic atmosphere. I hope whatever was bothering you has worked itself out! Great write!

[Ashley White]

Thank you my friend :D

[Coyote Poetry]

"Lifeless-sleepwalking;
Begging someone to rescue me..."
I have been saved many times and I have saved a few people in return. I hope. I understand the poem. Hard to walk the straight lines. Sometime we need a gentle voice and a helping hand. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Ashley White]

You understood the poem perfectly :)

[Stevo The POE-t]

Whenever were really feeling broken, nobody is there to catch us as we fall... I have been there many times in the past... It seems like rainy nights get the best of us, when we are down and out... A Razor seems so easy to pick up... It seems so easy to just pull it across the flesh... It was my drug for a long time... I started cutting myself after awhile just for the rush instead of emotional breakdown... Depression is a nightmare...

[Ashley White]

Your so right and it hurts so bad when your begging someone for help and they still deny you....

[Stevo The POE-t]

I know that feeling all too well girl

[Ashley White]

As do I...and it's sad when you become "used" to it

[Chris]

Your White Knight did come...and it made the difference too.

[Ashley White]

Yes he did and he makes the difference of life and death every day for me....but sometimes i find myself struggling to communicate with him

[Chris]

It's hard after hiding for sooo long to be real with someone who does care.

[Ashley White]

yes it is especially when your lied to and abused for so long

[Chris]

but you found a heart after all... and he found you too

[Ashley White]

Yes we did and I am happy