Can I

 

 

 Can i pull myself apart,

to get rid of the scars

Can I strip away

all the darkness in my soul

can i shed my skin

to remove the stains

 

Is it possible to wake up

and be a different you

can you just let it all go

everything you are

to shine and be light

is it even possible

to be real or to fall back

in to the same old you?

Reviews

[Shay]

Interesting and good

[Mockingbird]

this is how i would ponder if i were feeling hurt and regret. it's just impossible to become your old self, once something changes you could never be the same again. great job.

[Jvl narasimharao]

The poem is so simple to look at but its meaning is very complex.It is a question of changing our attitude.

[Coyote Poetry]

A very good poem. Most of us wish we could strip away some bad memories. I like the flow of thoughts and the desire of this poem. Thank you for the excellent poem.
Coyote

[Corset]

Expresses very well the age old dilemma to forgive and forget is not always so easy.

[Skye]

I think changing your ways is excruciatingly hard, but it is possible. Its takes time and patience. Lovely poem.

[♥ Lexii Boo &hea..]

okay like wow i totally relate so perfectly to this it's not even funny! the emotion and feeling is all there! the hurt and the wanting to change is perfect the word play is great! and just how well you put this is great!