A child's eyes

A child's eyes

A Poem by Ashley Armstrong
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A poem about the wonders of the world when you're a child

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When you look through a child's eyes 
Every hill is a mountain
Every puddle is an ocean
Every cardboard box is a ship
And the floor is lava

When you look through a child's eyes
Blankets can become a fort
Fairy tales could be real
Your neighbor is a witch
And people have homes in the clouds

When you look through a child's eyes
The world is full of magic and wonder
Clouds are made of sugar
And the moon is Swiss cheese
The mountains are waffle cones
And the snow is vanilla ice cream

© 2015 Ashley Armstrong


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Great poem! I love the since of innocence about it. Brilliant piece!..................:)..................................

Posted 6 Years Ago


Beautiful .. it captures the sense of awe and wonder and innocence and imagination :D :D

Did you see my "The Child" poem, from a different perspective.



Posted 6 Years Ago


Nice seeing eye to eye with a child. Great idea

Posted 6 Years Ago


children have a unique insight into the world. I loved the imagination it took to write this. fantastic.

Posted 6 Years Ago


Aw, I like this. This brought back many childhood memories for me.

Posted 6 Years Ago


Ashley, I was astonished by the vivid imagery and purity of this poem. It has all the qualities I look for in a poem: authenticity, originality, a genuine sense empowerment. I'll have to keep an eye on your work more closely :)

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I don't even like kid's honestly, but this poem was brilliant and so true.
I loved it because I'ts so different not many people write about a subject like this, and because of the pure truth to it all.
Kids are so innocent and yes they see the world through compleatly different eyes then we do.
They also don't know about all the stresses of being an adult, to them life is brilliant, and wonderful.
It would be nice to live the world through a child's eyes again, but eventually everyone grows up, and life is far different then how it was when you were a kid.
Great tale i really enjoyed reading it :)



Posted 6 Years Ago


this was a really cute sweet poem and made me smile because it described my childhood so much :) excellent write

Posted 6 Years Ago


Ashley Armstrong

6 Years Ago

I thought that clouds were cotton candy that only tall people could eat
Mikayla Rasmussen

6 Years Ago

haha nice :) i always kinda thought they were mashed potatoes
Ashley Armstrong

6 Years Ago

That's adorable
thank you so much for submitting to my contest! I very much enjoyed this read!!!
unfortunately I can only have one winner so.....
thanks for entering!!!
I had such a hard time declining this one. I really loved this... but it wasn't exactly what I was looking for. But it was an amazing read nonetheless
Keep up the fabulous work!
-Dragon

Posted 6 Years Ago



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Ashley Armstrong
Ashley Armstrong

florence, KY



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I like reading, writing, watching anime, listening to music, and watching movies. I'm 22 years old. My favorite things are Lord Of The Rings, The Hobbit, Harry Potter, Anything Disney or Dreamwork.. more..

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