Remember

Written for a friend

If this is the last time I see you

Will you remember my name?

Will you remember what I said?

Will you remember my face?

Will you remember how I acted?

If this is the last time I see you

I'll remember your name

I'll remember what you said

I'll remember your face

I'll remember how you acted

If this is the last time I see you

I will keep these memories

In a box with a lock

I'll keep the key in my heart

To keep it close

This is the last time I'll see you

So I'll say

"So long, farewell, take it easy, and goodbye."

Reviews

[MrKnowAll]

Lovely, really! Hmm, I have to say, many would do the mistake and use "those" and no "these" , so well done there.

Amazing write! left me a bit wondering with some questions, so at least 2 :
1. who is it that he deserves such emotion, affection ? a lover? or just a friend?
2. memories in a box with a key lock, why not just keep them in the heart ? :))

thanks for sharing! :)

[Ashley Armstrong]

A very good friend

[Mikayla Rasmussen]

lovely pattern and story :) the only flaw that got me a little was the rhythm, but that just may have been how i was reading it :) i like the concept behind this. its just so sweet and simple and i think everyone can relate :)