Sun Burn

sun burn
hurts really bad
wont stop hurting me
cant move
i call out
"It hurts,hurts"
                                             help , help

Reviews

[Chloe..Across the Unive..]

this is good! it does hurt!

[Ashton Blake]

I dont have a sunburn i just wrote abought one

[hmm]

ah, a little aloe it's all better.
Sunburns do hurt.