Ebb & Flow

grounding out
root your feet and feel them sink
attaching deep within the rich soil
feel the energy flow
from the tips of your toes
to the top of your head
you're a tree
reaching for the heavens, as you reach for the earth

standing hand to hand
feeling the energy moving within our circle
ebbing and flowing as it should
binding us in this moment
never stopping as magnitude builds
ever growing, never slowing

raising power
energy passing through us all
golden ring surrounding
casting our sacred space


we are now between the worlds

Reviews

[The Mad Prophet]

Very nicely done, and congrats on winning my contest. This is a nicely written piece I did enjoy reading. Obvious it's worth a climb on the Ladder of Light. Very well done.

Very powerful, very moving piece. How many people are in your circle? The fact that you all get together and do what needs to be done is respected in my eyes.

[Panda]

Ah yes this is a beautiful piece of writing, I love how you described the building of one's energy, and others with in the circle, casting out and becomming between the worlds or "realms". This is a great piece, I enjoyed it.

[Alexander Wolf]

There is something charged about this poem; i think its the sense of energy it gives.
Like the feeling of the air after a thunderstorm, there is just something organic about it.
Good job