At the Edge of Tomorrow

At the Edge of Tomorrow

A Poem by Celestine Astraea Firestorm

Chromatic summer daisies stretch toward the paling tangerine sun
Their tilted stems sway away from phantom shadows
Whilst spectres dance in the ever-increasing beclouded twilight
Luminescence hovers betwixt misty petals
Blossoms grasp for final moments of radiance
Trying desperately to create a vestige of day to get through the night

© 2008 Celestine Astraea Firestorm

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Beautiful imagery, well chosen language and such emotion!
Excellent piece!
TY for entering!


Posted 12 Years Ago

wow. this is a very compelling poem. a lot of big words thrown in with a twist. hard to understand, but an overall masterpiece. Good Job.

Posted 12 Years Ago

Sounds to me as if the flower is all of us at one point, trying to just make it through the night in being so strong yet completely crumbling. Great visuals! B

Posted 12 Years Ago

very visual... good words... like this poem. :)
I can feel the warmth of the sun and the cool breeze. hehehe!!

Keep up the good work! :D

Posted 12 Years Ago

Interesting perspective on determination.

Posted 12 Years Ago

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Added on August 17, 2008
Last Updated on August 30, 2008


Celestine Astraea Firestorm
Celestine Astraea Firestorm

Catania, Italy

I'm a 23 year old Gemini Pagan Extrovert. Writing has been an addiction of mine since the ripe age of 13. It's a thirst that is never quenched. Your GoddessAug 20, 2008 - Sep 20, 2008This is a c.. more..


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