The Sea on a Summer's Night

The Sea on a Summer's Night

A Poem by Celestine Astraea Firestorm

i stand

where the land meets the tide

i feel the salty water

as it rushes over my feet

i feel the sand as it disintegrates

beneath my toes

i see the starlit diamond sky

a perfect night for a walk on the beach

i sit down in the sand

letting the water lap at my skin

beckoning me to its waves

a cooling pulse streams through my veins

nothing can be wrong on a beautiful summer's night

such as this

© 2008 Celestine Astraea Firestorm


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The imagery in this is vivid and very much alive. I also enjoy the water on a summer's night. Well written indeed.

Posted 12 Years Ago


I really like this poem, it tells a story about the ocean on a starlit night. I enjoyed reading it very much.

Oh and thank you for joining my Group =).

Posted 12 Years Ago


A lovely poem. Good job. Thank you for sharing. Debileah

Posted 12 Years Ago



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Celestine Astraea Firestorm
Celestine Astraea Firestorm

Catania, Italy



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I'm a 23 year old Gemini Pagan Extrovert. Writing has been an addiction of mine since the ripe age of 13. It's a thirst that is never quenched. Your GoddessAug 20, 2008 - Sep 20, 2008This is a c.. more..

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