The Sea on a Summer's Night

i stand

where the land meets the tide

i feel the salty water

as it rushes over my feet

i feel the sand as it disintegrates

beneath my toes

i see the starlit diamond sky

a perfect night for a walk on the beach

i sit down in the sand

letting the water lap at my skin

beckoning me to its waves

a cooling pulse streams through my veins

nothing can be wrong on a beautiful summer's night

such as this

Reviews

[Scott H.]

The imagery in this is vivid and very much alive. I also enjoy the water on a summer's night. Well written indeed.

[Panda]

I really like this poem, it tells a story about the ocean on a starlit night. I enjoyed reading it very much.

Oh and thank you for joining my Group =).

[Deborah Leah Krempa]

A lovely poem. Good job. Thank you for sharing. Debileah