Retrograde Vacancy

Retrograde Vacancy

A Poem by Celestine Astraea Firestorm

Although all assailants acquiesce
Barely breathable bindings bother
Casually catching calm currents
During drastic daily demolitions
Even each equal empress
Firstly fabricates former fables
Gathering grand gossip glitches
However horrid his hoax
I inevitably incurred ignorance
Just jealously jinxing joy
Karma keenly keeps kneading
Lengthening liable, loosening lies
Moreover my mild manners
Never noticeable nor near
Open old oaths obdurately
Presenting plots pacifying plainly
Quietly quailing quick quotas
Raging roadies rile readily
Seething storms subject sooner
Thunder traces triangles tyrannically
Ultimately usual underlings upturn
Violently vulgar, visually vulnerable
Widely wayward, we wait
X-plosions x-ceed x-tant x-pectations
Your yeasty yawns yield
Zesty zealots zooming zealously

© 2008 Celestine Astraea Firestorm


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Very cool... and stuck so nicely to the challenge! Fave lines:
Lengthening liable, loosening lies
Moreover my mild manners
Never noticeable nor near
Open old oaths obdurately ...

Now how often do people used obdurately? Always good to see great use of vocab.
Good luck in the contest...
C

Posted 12 Years Ago



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Celestine Astraea Firestorm
Celestine Astraea Firestorm

Catania, Italy



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I'm a 23 year old Gemini Pagan Extrovert. Writing has been an addiction of mine since the ripe age of 13. It's a thirst that is never quenched. Your GoddessAug 20, 2008 - Sep 20, 2008This is a c.. more..

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