Eye light candles

Eye light candles,
twisted winking at
whirlpool water walls.
Cracked note sound saliva ,
arrives late in the day.
While the eye light candles'
wax melts to tears.

Free-floating mouths 
switch on insincere smiles.
With micro-tonal sneers that 
flex in a wind 
of pointless perpetuity. 

The smile's 
smile their smiles.
The eye light candle's 
wax tears fall to fate.
A sun wakes and exhales
light; but it's far too late.

#poetry   #melancholic   #sadness  

Reviews

[Warrior]

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