Rage - Hard to Tame

This poem is basically about me and the anger issues i am having nowadays. And it is dedicated to anybody who is going through the same distress. If you know what i mean ;) Please review :)

It has not a day,

Nor it has a night.

Not a month as to say,

To be a vicious sight.

 

It has not the sound of river,

Not the silence of the lost.

Worthy enough for a quiver,

Yet is not worthy of its cost.

 

It is not comparable,

To other emotions uncovered.

It is so inseparable,

And yet remains undiscovered.

 

I know its name,

But I don’t know it.

Rage, it’s hard to tame,

Tiny bit of pressure and you blow it.

Author's Note

wrote some after a looong time.. say 8,9 months. Pardon me if i lost the touch :D

Reviews

[Solar]

Rage has an energy and like any energy it can channelled, right?

The fact that you were able to harness and 'stream' it in a coherent poem is both creative and constructive.

[Aswin Suresh Nair]

Thank you! It can be channelled, the greatest virtue of all energies.

[Solar]

rage into 'raga' and 'rasa' :)

[Aswin Suresh Nair]

"raga" and "rasa". The essence in emotions. Couldn't have put it any better myself.

[Solar]

haha - now there's an idea for your next poem

[Aswin Suresh Nair]

pretty much. haha :D Glad you;'re around to ignite the flames ;) solar.

[Solar]

look forward to your reviews n feedback on my attempts. cheers!

[Aswin Suresh Nair]

You will see me often, trust me :)