Sweet on Broken

Sweet on Broken

A Poem by man Atek
"

on broken be sweet

"

 

Blassss …. Lap !*
With out expectation
Only wild of self emotion
To grabble up skin fearful
Until angle on centre of heart
 
Flutter makes small vibration
To develop existing what
be want another else
 
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Rumpin, 2009 Apr 02
man Atek
 
* = sound of losses something

© 2009 man Atek


Author's Note

man Atek
please to review, tq

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This is a very good piece. the imagery is wonderful as well as the flow.

Posted 14 Years Ago


I'm really 'digging' the way you write. It's lovely how you plant images in the reader's mind with a view short phrases.
Lovely poem.
-S.

Posted 14 Years Ago


wow i saw different images.
this was really creative and i liked the way you write.
i cant wait to read more.

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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man Atek
man Atek

Rumpin - bogor - east java, Indonesia



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