Nostalgia

Distorted synapses firing feelings of nostalgia
Nostalgia twisting memories in grey matter brain
The world was never simpler
I was
The world doesn't get more complicated
I do

Reviews

[SHEEMA HUQ]

here here

[Chris Lotus]

Heheh, this is awesome! Nice small package with a huge punch to it. The closer was the strongest (in my mind). When I read them I was like "Wow...what an amazing closer." It all connects throughout and you did an excellent job writing.

[Emily B]

hey, this is pretty tall stuff in a msall little package. . . just the sort of thing I like to find on days like today

[Shay33]

So beautifully simple, yet clearly well thought-out. I like the emotion. :)

[Titan]

The first two lines are really excellent, they catch the reader's attention :) And the message is really clear.

[run vs remember]

So true. Nicely worded.

[Hello, Goodbye]

brilliant!

[Therene]

Very creative use of scientific terms. :D

Short and concise. Thumbs up.

I'm hoping for more creative works from you.

[wolfshrew]

simple and describes nicely, i think thats always a good way to take a peice of writing. i liked this.