Nostalgia

Nostalgia

A Poem by atom

Distorted synapses firing feelings of nostalgia
Nostalgia twisting memories in grey matter brain
The world was never simpler
I was
The world doesn't get more complicated
I do

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Posted 7 Years Ago


Heheh, this is awesome! Nice small package with a huge punch to it. The closer was the strongest (in my mind). When I read them I was like "Wow...what an amazing closer." It all connects throughout and you did an excellent job writing.

Posted 10 Years Ago


hey, this is pretty tall stuff in a msall little package. . . just the sort of thing I like to find on days like today

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

So beautifully simple, yet clearly well thought-out. I like the emotion. :)

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

The first two lines are really excellent, they catch the reader's attention :) And the message is really clear.

Posted 10 Years Ago


So true. Nicely worded.

Posted 10 Years Ago


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brilliant!


Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Very creative use of scientific terms. :D

Short and concise. Thumbs up.

I'm hoping for more creative works from you.

Posted 10 Years Ago


simple and describes nicely, i think thats always a good way to take a peice of writing. i liked this.

Posted 10 Years Ago



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Added on December 15, 2009
Last Updated on January 23, 2016
Tags: nostalgia, memories, past, change

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