Memories of a wishful mind

Memories of a wishful mind

A Poem by Atosa

Oh, sweet childhood memory of mine

Endless sunshine and peals of laughter


I held you in my hand like a child

Holds a newly hatched chick


Cherished you like the air I breathe

Held you close when in need


Now the old photo album is found

After years the truth came out


Oh, sweet childhood memory of mine

You were created by a wishful mind


Oh sweet childhood memory of mine

You were such a beautiful lie 




© 2011 Atosa


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I know saying, "I like this" is so dull and cliche', but I like the words you have chosen here, the way they flow together, and the story itself. I think I "get it"; not sure, since poetry is a game of interpretation. The last lines linger and leave a story that I long to finish knowing. Overall, well done.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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I love the feeling

Posted 10 Years Ago


Beautiful poem; childhood memories are always an interesting thing to pick apart - could they be memories of true experience or simply the power of suggestion? I really enjoy this piece as you capture the beauty of the human mind through words.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I know saying, "I like this" is so dull and cliche', but I like the words you have chosen here, the way they flow together, and the story itself. I think I "get it"; not sure, since poetry is a game of interpretation. The last lines linger and leave a story that I long to finish knowing. Overall, well done.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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