A Moment of You

A moment of glorious smile 
which blossoms and 
adorns your charming face

A moment of shared happiness 
which bears my name on it 
for which I am responsible

A moment of forgiveness 
when no past deeds burden us 
when we look at future with promise

A moment of intertwined hearts 
when words cease to matter 
when we speak in silence

A moment of togetherness
A moment of passion
A moment of you

Reviews

[ElizaB]

Thank you for entering your poem in my competition.

This is such a beautiful piece.

I love all of your descriptions and I feel that you convey so much love in such a few lines.

This stanza in particular was my favourite:

A moment of forgiveness
when no past deeds burden us
when we look at future with promise

It is difficult in life to just 'be', whether that be in the moment alone or with somebody else. You have captured something we all want in three lines. To live in the moment and forget the past, to look forward.

[Devashish Kumar]

thank you for your nice comment.

[mattavelli]

Hello, Devashish, thank you for entering my contest! :)
This is a nice tribute to love.

[marilyn 1225]

GREAT WORK A VERY LOVING PIECE OF WORK

[J. Hampton]

it is a beautiful piece .I enjoyed this