A Moment of You

A Moment of You

A Poem by Devashish Kumar

A moment of glorious smile 
which blossoms and 
adorns your charming face

A moment of shared happiness 
which bears my name on it 
for which I am responsible

A moment of forgiveness 
when no past deeds burden us 
when we look at future with promise

A moment of intertwined hearts 
when words cease to matter 
when we speak in silence

A moment of togetherness
A moment of passion
A moment of you

© 2017 Devashish Kumar


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Thank you for entering your poem in my competition.

This is such a beautiful piece.

I love all of your descriptions and I feel that you convey so much love in such a few lines.

This stanza in particular was my favourite:

A moment of forgiveness
when no past deeds burden us
when we look at future with promise

It is difficult in life to just 'be', whether that be in the moment alone or with somebody else. You have captured something we all want in three lines. To live in the moment and forget the past, to look forward.



Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Devashish Kumar

4 Years Ago

thank you for your nice comment.



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Hello, Devashish, thank you for entering my contest! :)
This is a nice tribute to love.

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

GREAT WORK A VERY LOVING PIECE OF WORK

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

it is a beautiful piece .I enjoyed this

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Thank you for entering your poem in my competition.

This is such a beautiful piece.

I love all of your descriptions and I feel that you convey so much love in such a few lines.

This stanza in particular was my favourite:

A moment of forgiveness
when no past deeds burden us
when we look at future with promise

It is difficult in life to just 'be', whether that be in the moment alone or with somebody else. You have captured something we all want in three lines. To live in the moment and forget the past, to look forward.



Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Devashish Kumar

4 Years Ago

thank you for your nice comment.

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Devashish Kumar
Devashish Kumar

New Delhi, Delhi, India



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