Feast on Their Pains

Feast on Their Pains

A Poem by Hippy

i thikn im going to take a couple poems just like this in mix it to one epic one


Tear the smile from her face

Carve the hurt in her soul

Break her spirits

Just to fill yours


Drink her tears

Feast on her pains

Feel good about yourself

You glutinous basterd


Fill that hole in your heart

The only, worst way how

But its ok, its all human nature

To destroy others to better yourself


Aren’t you glad to be human

© 2010 Hippy

Author's Note

its similar to someother peices id like a review

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Shocking honesty...love it. It's bite stings. "Carve the hurt in her soul" really struck me. Nice write.

Posted 12 Years Ago

I love the truth behind this. It sounds so sick and yet its just a more exaggerated version of everyday life. Great job.

Posted 13 Years Ago

Such truth within your words. So many people use others to either get ahead or to make themselves feel better. It's a terrible thing actually. You portray that perfectly with a hint of sarcasm (atleast I sense it). Nicely done.

Posted 13 Years Ago

Love the sarcasm. Fits well with the harsh words and meaning. Darn shame so many fit this description.

Posted 13 Years Ago

I think 'basterd' in the second stanza is spelled b*****d. I like it, and it definitely is a powerful slap in the face. Great write.:)


Posted 13 Years Ago

Someone already pointed out your technical errors so I won't repeat them. Oh, you should have a question mark at the end there, too.

Boy, do you get angry in this one. There are no mixed metaphors or veiled words, this is out there, in your face, and straight to the point. I think poetry has forgotten that that is okay to do sometimes; people tend to get wrapped too tightly in metaphor. This was a welcome break.

Posted 13 Years Ago

this gave me a sadface ): good write(:

Posted 13 Years Ago

So so true. Horrible, but it's the truth. Great piece.

Posted 13 Years Ago

- definetly a very strong piece - great images in this too

Posted 13 Years Ago

I don't think this should have made me smile, but maybe I'm sadistic. It's really good, I wouldn't worry about technical s**t, it's the idea behind a piece that matters, otherwise why would anyone read it?

In your face imagery too - drink her tears. That's strong.

Posted 13 Years Ago

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Added on March 12, 2010
Last Updated on March 12, 2010



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