Carved on this Tree for Eternity 2

Carved on this Tree for Eternity 2

A Poem by Hippy
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this is the secound one that completes the AW and AE carved in this tree for eternity read em both so you can understand

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Now I burn

Your name

From this tree

Leaving me

To stay for eternity

Alone

Til she comes along

To carve a new name

In this tree

Bonding

Me and her

For the next

Eternity

© 2010 Hippy


Author's Note

Hippy
this is the secound one that completes the AW and AE carved in this tree for eternity read em both so you can understand
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It makes sense man, but I know why you do such things. You won't admit it, but I am sure you loved her. I've had my own tree so to speak, and I carved the names into them too. Except I never burnt the others name, more or so I burnt my own. I can reflect from these pieces, good work bro. Keep it up

Posted 14 Years Ago


I really love this. I read the first one and Loved that one as well but the continuation was fire. I love how it was short and to the point but even more how you explained heartbreak, anger, and hope all in one poem. great work!

Posted 14 Years Ago


Short .. but most good poems are short... short and sweet, like this one, good job.

Posted 14 Years Ago


love it, great write

Posted 14 Years Ago


very nice piece - emotion and imagery in this is great

Posted 14 Years Ago


interesting work, and i agree, it's really cute...

Posted 14 Years Ago


wonderfully amazing :-D i like your writing!

Posted 14 Years Ago


this is wonderful.

Posted 14 Years Ago


deep man very deep and I love it =]

Posted 14 Years Ago


Awww this is cute. :)) hehehe

Posted 14 Years Ago



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Added on March 19, 2010
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Hippy
Hippy

Underland, IN



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