Live it Through

Live it Through

A Poem by Hippy
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idk

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We all need to live

We all need to die

We all must suffer

Then take flight

 

Times a lie that just flies by

But what if it flies too high

Out of conscious perception we all die

For with no perception there is no life

 

It will all end but its alright

Just cruise the ride and ride the high

Live life the way you want to

Preserve to keep all life in drive

© 2010 Hippy


Author's Note

Hippy
if you got a name for it gimme an idea

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Perhaps..."The Honest Truth"?

Posted 13 Years Ago


I would simply title it "Life." It is well written and true.

Krys

Posted 13 Years Ago


An outstanding poem

Posted 13 Years Ago


I could imagine pulling these lyrics from an old dusty shoebox. The words come from a true free spirit. It let my imagination drift away..but also put my brain to work. You have collected some inspiring thoughts. Nice Job!

Posted 13 Years Ago


its interesting and i like it a lot

Posted 13 Years Ago


Good poem, but a couple of things,
*But what if it flies to high (too?)
*Just cruise the ride and rid the high (ride?)
and experiment with punctuation. It'd help your writing a lot. But really good poem :)

Posted 13 Years Ago



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Hippy

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My names austin lee wallace i am a hippy and thats what they all call me. i love music its the greatest, i play guitar the harp piano flute violin and whatever i can get me hands on. Im not much of a .. more..

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