Rot

wrote this when I was a little depressed. What I wanted to do, but it wasn't raining, and I don't have big trees near me.

Coldness takes hold of my bones

As I sit in the rain.

I never wanted to be alone

But it’s easier on the pain.

I sit in a tree

With one leg dangling down,

An arm wrapped around my knee.

So much downpour, I almost drown.

An angry twist of clouds above.

A whirl of winds all around.

But I don’t think much of

I won’t mind if I hit ground.

I can’t go inside, for no inside is near.

I come to this spot,

So no one can hear

Me rot

With my feelings of despair.

 

Copyright 2012 to LiquidFire

Author's Note

If there are 'grammar problems,' ignore them. They're supposed to be there. Thanks for reading.

Reviews

[snickerdoodle]

really amazing read. Especially:
I never wanted to be alone
But it’s easier on the pain.
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I come to this spot,
So no one can hear me
rot
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With my feelings of despair. -not sure this line already conveyed. ending with "rot" more profound...maybe...ending the story progression as titled