Rot

Rot

A Poem by LiquidFire
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wrote this when I was a little depressed. What I wanted to do, but it wasn't raining, and I don't have big trees near me.

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Coldness takes hold of my bones

As I sit in the rain.

I never wanted to be alone

But it’s easier on the pain.

I sit in a tree

With one leg dangling down,

An arm wrapped around my knee.

So much downpour, I almost drown.

An angry twist of clouds above.

A whirl of winds all around.

But I don’t think much of

I won’t mind if I hit ground.

I can’t go inside, for no inside is near.

I come to this spot,

So no one can hear

Me rot

With my feelings of despair.

 

Copyright 2012 to LiquidFire

© 2012 LiquidFire


Author's Note

LiquidFire
If there are 'grammar problems,' ignore them. They're supposed to be there. Thanks for reading.

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really amazing read. Especially:
I never wanted to be alone
But it’s easier on the pain.
--
I come to this spot,
So no one can hear me
rot
--

With my feelings of despair. -not sure this line already conveyed. ending with "rot" more profound...maybe...ending the story progression as titled

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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really amazing read. Especially:
I never wanted to be alone
But it’s easier on the pain.
--
I come to this spot,
So no one can hear me
rot
--

With my feelings of despair. -not sure this line already conveyed. ending with "rot" more profound...maybe...ending the story progression as titled

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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