I will be a reminder

every time i see you dive to where you can't see,

i'll be your savior,

i'll open your eyes, i will remind.

every time you lose your way,

i'll be your guardian angel,

i'll take you by the hand, i will remind you, my companion.

For i have watched you cry more than once,

i don't want another tear to fall, but i shall hold them and wipe.

every time you are to give second chances,

i'll remind of the first fail,

i'll help you decide the road you'll take,

i am your reminder, i am your friend.

 

Reviews

[InsanityWriter]

Very nice. ^_^ True friendship is about being there for the other person. :)

[Aya]

yes, thank you :)

[Yellow Butterfly]

Isn't this what 'Friends' are for......


Nicely penned :O)

[Aya]

thank you :)

[Yasmin]

This is a lovely poem.
I like the emotional bake-up you offer and the love you spread between your lines.
Well done :)

[Aya]

thanks :)

[Coyote Poetry]

A beautiful poem of love and friendship. Thank you for sharing the outstanding poem of love and concern.
Coyote

[Nithin Purple]

every time you lose your way,
i'll be your guardian angel,
i'll take you by the hand, i will remind you, my companion.

beautyfull lines

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Great work, Aya :)

[Aya]

thank you :)

[scripted]

oh how I can relate to being a good friend... this was a great poem. I thought it showed an altrustic side to being there for someone you care about. Well writen and thank you for sharing. Yours truely, Danielle

[Aya]

thank youu

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~ oh, this is beautiful... you bring out the qualities of the perfectly sensitive friend very well... i love this piece of poetry...

[Aya]

thanks alot serah

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~ you're very welcome, aya...

[Valentine]

A very nice write..lot os emotion in this one..Katihe

[Aya]

thank you :)

[dunnia]

this is beautiful

[Aya]

thanks dunnia :)