"You"

me and life will always be agreed on you....! just wrote simply..hope you would like this friends.

Life asked me "what is your destination"?
I replied very contentedly "you",
when I asked life” what is your destination?"
life smilingly said  "you",
thus I and life have the same destination that is "you".

Reviews

[Ees]

Short, a little bit odd, reminding of old stories of men talking to trees or something else I can't quite place, but I really like it. It all makes perfect sense!

[Dr Ayaz chandio]

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[Ruth]

Ohhh!!!
Fabulous!
I love this, clever xo

[Dr Ayaz chandio]

thanks :)

[Cherrie Palmer]

simplicity is always best

[Dr Ayaz chandio]

Thanks dear.

[Coyote Poetry]

A very good answer in this poem. Living life and celebrating the pleasures of life should be our goal. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Dr Ayaz chandio]

Thanks dear Coyote

[Steven Cash]

yea adoable

[Dr Ayaz chandio]

THANKS

[Cerise]

aww..simple words but very sweet...nicely written...few lines with great meaning...:)

[Dr Ayaz chandio]

THANKS DEAR

[s.r.knight]

This is simple and adorable. Love it

[Dr Ayaz chandio]

Thanks

[David the writer]

Interesting good job

[Dr Ayaz chandio]

thanks dear David. love and blessings.

[David the writer]

Don;t make my skin burn lol thanks u too. thanks for supporting this interesting poem that makes me think

[Dr Ayaz chandio]

welcome dear.

[Call_Me_Miss_Imperfect]

Oh, this is such an interesting poem that you shared with us! I enjoyed reading it since it's well-written and the truth at the same time. The whole time we're trying our best to complete our destination in life, and life's destination is us. I think you done quite a great job, please continuing writing! :)

Ashley Rivers--Dream BIG and you'll win BIG:)

[Dr Ayaz chandio]

thanks again for your kindness Ashley..stay blessed.

[Call_Me_Miss_Imperfect]

You're very welcome and thank you! :)

[Mockingbird]

very poignant and thought-provoking. sounds like it's coming from someone who has all that he needs in life and celebrates it. great job.

[Dr Ayaz chandio]

Thanks dear:)